46 B1 | 5. Klasse | Unit 10: This is home PEEL Paragraph (C) from Cal’s blog post follows the PEEL structure. Put the sentences from exercise 3 into a logical order and write them down below. WRITING 4a Now that the sentences are in the correct order, link them to make a coherent paragraph. b Writing tip A clear paragraph structure is not only important when you write about your opinion (for example, in blog comments), but in creative writing and storytelling, too! Download the complete blog post and study the way Cal talks directly to the reader in the first and in the last paragraph. You will be able to adapt these opening and closing sentences easily when you have to write a blog post yourself. Write them down in your notebook to make sure you remember them. Original paragraph (C) Point I would definitely buy our house again. Renovating is a lot of hard work, but we have learned so much and we have really grown as people. We have been amazed by how friendly and welcoming our neighbours in the village are, and we do not miss city life at all. And, as Claire pointed out, our life has become an adventure thanks to that old cottage. I don’t think we would have so much fun if we had followed our original plan and bought the flat in Glasgow. Evidence Explanation Link Changed paragraph (C) Nur zu Prüfzwecken – Eigentum des Verlags öbv
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