Prime Time 5/6, Writing, Arbeitsheft

3 36 Text types Improving a blog post a) The version of the blog post below is a draft version of the sample text on page 35. b) Read it and highlight all the words/sentences that should be edited before the post is published. You should: • remove any unnecessary adverbs • replace any words that have been used within the previous two sentences • rethink sentences that are hard to understand • make sure the text can be read quickly by using headings, subheadings or bullet points • check the language and style of the text • mix short sentences with more complex ones 25  Font 9 pt + Add Media Visual Text Word count: 274 Draft saved at 4:20:02 p.m. Last edited by admin on February 18, 2018 at 3:36 p.m. Bullying is a problem in very many schools and sports clubs. Many students have actually already experienced some form of bullying. Last week, I myself kind of witnessed an incident at my sports club. When I entered the locker room, I saw two older boys actually attacking a 13-year-old student. I knew neither the boy nor the attackers. I was actually very shocked to see such a really violent attack. When they saw me, the two attackers pushed me to the side and ran away. Bullying can affect kind of anyone. Kids who are bullied very often feel really alone and totally helpless. Bullying can actually cause illnesses and often influences school participation in a really negative way. Yet, it can also be a problem for bystanders. Kids who witness bullying are actually more likely to feel kind of anxious or totally depressed and may miss or skip school. Schools actually have a great responsibility when it comes to dealing with teen bullies. First of all, schools need to make sure that bullying incidents are reported more often. Students and parents actually need to know that the school takes bullying very seriously and will take any necessary actions. Apart from that, teachers should get training in spotting and handling bullying. Finally, parents should be encouraged to support the school’s efforts and assist in activities and projects. Bullying is completely unacceptable. You can actually help by standing up for the bullied, and by standing up for yourself. Do not let the bullies get you down. You are totally perfect just the way you are. Send in your comments to show how important this issue is. c) Compare the results with the sample text. Which passages have been changed? d) Study the text again and add one paragraph that deals with the topic. Reading: Why people blog a) Read the article below. b) While reading, fill in the headlines which fit best for each paragraph. 26  Express yourself and share your passions Become an authority in your field of expertise Refine your writing skills Share your knowledge Starting a blog is easy People blog for various reasons. There are even different types of blogs – business, lifestyle, fashion, food and entertainment blogs, among others. Here is a list of reasons why people blog and how blogging can benefit your personal or professional life. 1. Countless blogs serve as a platform for people to voice their ideas, thoughts, and feelings. Whether your passion is business, personal finance, cooking, politics, photography or marketing, blogging gives you the opportunity to connect with people who share the same passions. A blog is also a great way to build awareness and get support for a political, environmental or social cause. Nur zu Prüfzwecken – Eige tum des Verlags öbv