171 Sample answer Michael_Angelo <michael.andritzer@write.com> I read your blog post on the art exhibition and wanted to let you know how sorry (but not surprised) I was to hear about the lack of interest. If you ask me, most people have absolutely no idea what makes good art. They think only the classic stuff matters. All they’re interested in is ticking off a list of ‘mustsees’ and trying to impress their friends. It makes them feel more important and educated, but do they understand the true meaning of art? I doubt it. What people don’t get is that real art sets them free. They’re all so preoccupied with their technological devices and scientific ideas that it’s the creative aspect of life they’re so often missing. And art can provide this. It can encourage them to think more critically and see the world with different eyes. Art has the power to lift them out of their drab everyday world, and, let’s face it, don’t we all need that? Let me urge you to get out and enjoy art wherever you may find it – be it posters, street art or a small gallery in your neighbourhood. Escape your everyday life for just a while and get inspired by someone else’s imagination. Forget the world, where all the news seems to be negative. Go and relax and find some peace of mind with art. Perhaps you’ll find yourself at the same time! So, just do yourself a favour, enjoy art on your terms, and forget the Mona Lisa! Bullet point 1 Bullet point 2 Bullet point 3 The last sentence wraps up your blog comment and gives the reader something to think about. It could also be a separate paragraph. User name and email address Introduction: Refer to the blog post in the prompt. Avoid prompt lifting. Get the reader’s attention. Address the reader. Use linking devices to link the paragraphs. Encourage the reader to take action. Nur zu Prüfzwecken – Eigentum des Verlags öbv
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